Typically narcissistic blogging.

Wartime

I don’t post my poetry here, mostly because it is bad. But also because it increases my vulnerability on this blog. But tonight I was feeling this. A lot. So here it is. Wartime. I wrote this 7 years ago. I wish it were not still relevant.

Wartime

there must be some sense of betrayal
involved in falling out of love with somebody;
in that space between;
the tongue becomes confused when it says
“i loved,” instead of, “i love.”

as in,

i loved you so.

we built this like a fortress, and now i see
why wise kings murdered their architects;
i see, now. i see you.
with your blueprints and your cannons.

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3 Responses

  1. Gwen

    Nice work. I really like this.

    August 20, 2012 at 8:53 pm

    • Thank you. I think I gave myself a minor heart attack posting it.

      August 20, 2012 at 10:47 pm

  2. You should post more poetry. It’s really quite good.

    August 21, 2012 at 5:40 am

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